As she lay on the bed, in that hospital room, just them and the needles that pricked mercilessly into her wrist, drops trickling into her blood each second the clock ticked, she knew she was to go, he would never let her...
He would never cry with her lying right there, battling each minute, he was her strength and she, his life...
They worked out life together, saw happiness and ambitions come true....always wanted each other to be a part of the shared journey of life...
If he wanted to work out options in his life, it was with her
And
If she wanted to live every moment, it was with him...
Their love simply defied everything, so naturally...
Suddenly, she broke the silence,
While she looked into his eyes...
He wanted to keep looking at her because he never could take his eyes off her,
But, this time he lowered his eyes because she always perfectly read his mind...
She asked "will you do something I say"
He was at loss of words and there was this sudden urge from somewhere inside, he wanted to cry aloud..
But, he held on for his love...
"Hold me" she said, her eyes twinkling light
He softly put his hands around her,
She said "hold me, just hold me to your heart and all around me"
He was careful, the needles were at her wrist this time...
"Thank you, Thank you for loving me like this, for sharing my life and for making it ours"...she said
Those were her last words to him...
He thought to himself, while all the tears n wetness in his eyes, he held for so long,
just flowed like a river with no bounds, once and for all.....
It stays forever, he thought....love stays a life time...
He would never cry with her lying right there, battling each minute, he was her strength and she, his life...
They worked out life together, saw happiness and ambitions come true....always wanted each other to be a part of the shared journey of life...
If he wanted to work out options in his life, it was with her
And
If she wanted to live every moment, it was with him...
Their love simply defied everything, so naturally...
Suddenly, she broke the silence,
While she looked into his eyes...
He wanted to keep looking at her because he never could take his eyes off her,
But, this time he lowered his eyes because she always perfectly read his mind...
She asked "will you do something I say"
He was at loss of words and there was this sudden urge from somewhere inside, he wanted to cry aloud..
But, he held on for his love...
"Hold me" she said, her eyes twinkling light
He softly put his hands around her,
She said "hold me, just hold me to your heart and all around me"
He was careful, the needles were at her wrist this time...
"Thank you, Thank you for loving me like this, for sharing my life and for making it ours"...she said
Those were her last words to him...
He thought to himself, while all the tears n wetness in his eyes, he held for so long,
just flowed like a river with no bounds, once and for all.....
It stays forever, he thought....love stays a life time...
She'd left behind two pairs of eyes, their first born, twins God desired, since she couldn’t have it another time..their bundles of joy, just a few days old, one of those happiest days of their lives when they first saw their own wonders,
A bit of him n a bit of her...
For him to love them, all his life and for them to love him always...cauz they both loved kids and that was what her parting gift of life for him !
The rhythm of her breath, feel, only he could,
The beats of her silence, interpret, only he could,
Like tender flowers bathed in mild showers of rain,
Dew drops woven like pearls,
Life's soft blossoms,
Chirping birds, bringing along the liveliness in her laughter,
Her heart n soul rained life's love,
Linger, it did,
and
He remained drenched in the music of her love..all life
(Pic - as she watched the sunset today, in midst of those moments when I took my eyes off the monitor...excuse me for the 'not good 'clarity of the pic, thanks to my cell phone cam )
16 comments:
A bit of him n a bit of her...
That can make him live for years seeing her in those eyes.
Touchy and it took me back to some old memories of my friend.
Touching :( .
...love stays a life time...
Very True.
Beautiful!! That's what life is, sharing and caring!:))
Love the photo too.Enjoy your weekend.
So touching, eyes moistened by the end, simply beautifully u brought out companionship love and togetherness of a couple. Absolutely wonderful! Btw vl wish in person soon;)till then u tc sweets.
luvvly pic :D!!
If your're too open minded, your brains will fall out :D
U r absconding again:)
where are you, gal?
ammu.
Read ur contributions on msn. Awesome it was. This one is so true to life and so touchy! Keep going Nikhil kuruvilla (fil-uk)hope u placed me:) wtz retn date?
Hey put on something new re with wahan ke tumhaara smile signature lovely pics. Anju's been too eager to touch base! aajkal toone sms ka jawab dena band kar diya kya? wait till we hound you next, we tried called at club quarters too, nahi mili tum, you hang on boss dont work late haha. Anju's kinda pretty mad at you! thnkgod tera comment regulation wala chakkar haata diya tune hahaaa, now atleast our gang can chat her if you refuse to post anything! dont tell us that yr bc there too !
quite nice and u hav that feminine touch in yr design!!
Arresting, I must admit Seema. Those few lines uve penned at the end are absolutely engrossing and mind boggling. But you know its very difficult to find genuine love like you hv described, its a very crazy world. Feels nice to read thoughts like this that stay with you in all phases of life.
Hi, always a silent reader of this blog but couldn't stop asking you where are the archieves? Hope you put them back. it was a good breather reading the clouds and can I tell you those few tage you did were amazing. If possible pls put ur work back!
Simply beautiful...So lovely & touching....pure love is eternal!
Priya - Yaa..a bit of him n a bit of her…the best of both you could put it as :) that's what babies are according me:))
Dhanush :) Thanks
Ashu - Absolutely…in this corporate lives that we live..these are the little things that make a big difference and honestly, these are rare to find too :) you can have people showing off emotions also these days, genuine emoitions are a rare trait! Had a nice time hope you enjoyed too…well that is my desk view !
Arun - Thanks !
Endevourme - Thank You, I clicked :)
SOC - hahaa they've already fallen off am gathering the bits n pieces ;) vattu unde alle, ente samshyam maari, am sure now ;)
Priya - Was caught up with life, for a change! Travelling n stuff am back and one more set of travel n am done :) Professional n Personal front in absolute competition and travel is full fledge on both fronts! am seriously back to blogging too..lol have set targets for myself now..you'll see updates here often now..thanx for being concerned..appreciate it sweets !
Tulipspeaks - Ammu - heyy was away for sometime..am back now..fingers crossed:)) Nice to cya after long and thanks for checking
Nikhil :) hey ofcourse my memory has not yet failed me hehe it was nice meeting ya :) ithaanu ente matte lokham other the chirpiness you see ! Weekend bak n then nattileku ponam Easter alel mummy papa vechekilla :) jing bang aanu..aake kollam akane lekshanangal oke unde ;)) hehe but what's it if there are no challenges in life le..there's no sense of achievement in taking a beaten n trodden path..like we spoke we make the rules, stay focussed and break new grounds:) so cu around ..btw it was nice seeing you here and that was quick
Arun - Ufffff the biggest mistake is you guys finding out this page ;)) I will post and this is not becoming a chat counter lol..btw I don’t chat okkkkk…I know what u guys are hitting at ok !
Dheeraj - Thanks, nice to know u liked it
Emmanuel - Thank You…yeah I admit it’s a crazy world..but arent we the ones who can make a difference by being genuine and true to each emotion that we show on us :) that's where we become individuals who can make the difference !
Anon - Well…I am getting those done in a lill coffee table book form and didn’t want them to get duplicated anywhere else and hence deleted and specially did not want duplication since the book is a dedication to someone special..hope ive answered your querry and yeah I don’t see any reason why I cant put the tag back :)
Flying Stars - interesing name..thanks and indeed a pleasure to know it was good…yes, you hit the nail on the head…pure love is eternal :)
Looks like you are in love girl? But beware love is extinct its only materialism these days. Insterested in an argument on this?
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