Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Incredible tiny glows...

There's a world deep inside me,
Refuses to open up easily,
Only mine,
Secret desires,
Passions wild,
Unseen and uncontrolled,
Flows deep like an unbound ocean,
I possessively hold dear...
A world I have sure to share sometime,
Otherwise, how could I be sincere to myself…

There's a world deep inside me,
Refuses to open up easily,
Secrets in the labryinth,
That world I have sure to share sometime,
Otherwise, how could I be sincere to myself…

There's a world deep inside me,
Refuses to open up easily,
So strong and determined,
Somewhere in that world,
Along the dark tresses, tread boldly,
Incredible tiny glows of brightness...

12 comments:

Dhanush said...

Everyone has their own share of mind deep with in themselves. And when they share it with some one, it becomes life.

priya said...

There's a world deep inside me,
Refuses to open up easily,
Only mine,
Secret desires,
Passions wild,
Unseen and uncontrolled,
Flows deep like an unbound ocean,

Very true and deep down we all r different no matter how extrovert u r. Secrets r good to keep coz it can make passions wild.

Nikhil Kuruvilla said...

Ithu kalakki. LFW. As dhanush said, it becomes life whn u decide to share it. Am still lost in the intricacy of the words n trying to fathom the feelings therein. Btw am all set packed n ready, leave oppichu,dnt ask me how, can u imagine, eppe kazhinolu packing,apol ellam paranjapole vill touch base vth ya in ur fav country, u hv a safe flite,am so excited.

Arun said...

Really? dont worry we'll get the one you decide to share it with and get it off him;)Jokes apart, very well carved emotions Seemzzz. You have a blasting trip and we are all waiting to come there, create an event for us to finally visit YOUR God's own country soonnnn;) hahaaahahaaaa Anju nd Mansi's laughing away imagining how you gonna jump wild reading this. Take care and have fun.

Seema said...

Dhanush - Yes, I guess or rather am sure that everyone has their own share:)

Priya - Absolutely girl..secrets and wild passion, to b shared with that one special entity:)

Nikhil - Thank You. Cool, am happy you made it! You too take care and have a nice flight and dont chew neone's brains off plz! Markts tanked so you have nothing to dream of lol so you have a good nap on the long flight!

Arun - hmmmmmmmmmmmmm what are u guyz planning for the long weekend? hope you get to going somewhere rather than pulling each other's legs! I will update you on the fun and frolic at my end :) take care and try and be good you 3 devils lol

Anonymous said...

You have a way with putting emotions into words or you have a way with feelings? Whichever way this is beautiful

Deepa said...


Concealed within,
       in reason’s labyrinth,
Cascading emotions,
       sloshes around.
Trusting the hope,
      latent within,
Twinkling and shimmering
      from shine within.

Jibu said...

You sure have a hidden world inside of you lady with a teaser like this. Finance figures n poetry with a heartful of emotions-lethal!

Anonymous said...

let the words etch the clouds more often and the crispy tags are not yet back?

zest said...

Typical Scorpio traits as your profile says-mad passion, imaginative,expressive and put down honestly from the soul. Tempts one question - is it love

tulipspeaks said...

there IS a world inside all us seema. a world of secret tht is. no, we don't let it open so easily.. its our own paradise and i dont think there is any reason why we should let anyone to knw even a bit of it.

:)


ammu.

Seema said...

Anon - TY, which ever way no stress!

Deepa - So true :) thanx for jotting them down here

Jibu :)donno what made u say Lethal though

Anon - When i try putting them them come as new posts cant get them on as backdated ones :( regrets on that.

Zest - You seem to know Scorpions well:) Its love of life ;)

Ammu - Agreed to that..we wouldnt share it with ANYONE but surely with that Someone whom we feel like :) hope you are doing fine..tc