Friday, April 25, 2008

At the beginning...



Wasn’t a touch,
Nor a look ...
Was unveiling souls thru testing times,
Entwining hearts yearning in silence,
Cherishing dreams for each other,
Striving to see happiness in the others eyes,
Moonlights heavenly grace in closeness,
Endless divinity in walks under twinkling stars,
Musical sound of rains in the still of the night,
Mystic of sparkling mountain streams,
Feelings flowing along endless river,
Desires lit up in strange delights,
Tender n tantalizing,
Renewing passion...

It is trust that never deters,
Something you can’t part with,
Something never choosen,
Something that simply happened inspite of all odds,
Reminding that nothing else really matters,
Something that cant be explained yet to remain,
Formidable fortress of love n care with radiance divine,
Adorable to outlast everything…
On a road to keep goin on,
A crazy adventure,
For each other when the world stops turning,
To remind there's hope,
Always a start..
Till the end...

18 comments:

Rejil Krishnan said...

Waiting for someone to comment… :-) coz sometimes I feel wrong to misinterpret the poetess’s world…
Trust is truly the backbone of any relation… even a parent-child relation journeys on trust…and with the sounds and visuals u hv made the abstract impeccably authentic and beautiful...Hats off.. ;-)and i hope the beginnign remaisn so till the end...
nannayitundu…istayitto…No ambiguities, I meant the post only :-)

priya said...

Feelings flowing along endless river,

Seema,

Sometimes its good to keep our feelings like a pond u know what I mean and if we let it off like rivers, it becomes unstoppable.

Sreejith Kumar said...

Yo Seema! Good lines again! Back here after a long time!

Seema said...

Rejil - Thanks and hey whn its poetry its always less readers and hence comments and its personal interpretation so no wrongs and rites there! This time sounds are also effective:) lol ambiquities!

Priya - The silly heart tells you when its the right time for feelings to flow endless...otherwise as you said save it in the pond of your heart for the rite one and the rite time:))

Sreejith - Thanks..belcome bak!

Jeeves said...

Liked the flow of words.But, doesnt trust deter?

Seema said...

Thanks Jeeves..tell me would it be trust if it ever detered? not at all...

Nikhil Kuruvilla said...

Kalakiyaloe, let this music play till the end.Amen. Music, thoughts, pictures - intoxicating concoction.

IDriSh LAxmIdHAR said...

nice flow of words..

Keshi said...

too beautiful Seema!

Keshi.

Endevourme said...

/-A crazy adventure?
dont agree...sometimes we are too sure of things, its no more adventure then :D

Anonymous said...

Engaged?

Anonymous said...

music is super,is it seriously wedding bells for you?

Nirmal's Blog said...

u write great yaar....

dont mind if i cut paste it to impress some gals..lolsss

Seema said...

Hmmm Nikhil :)

TY Idrish

Keshi - Thanks babes

Endevourme - Dont make it too watertight and planned..leave some things for the excitment and adventure of it too!

Nirmal - Smart thought, but see that you mug up a few words too, what if she just leans against you and ask you to come out with one of those spontaneously lol

Dhanush said...

Nice and Romantic as usual.

Jac said...

:))

VvK said...

wow...

hmmm...if there's trust, then no one can keep you from being happy!!!

VvK said...

nnyan thanne!!!
HD
:)