Monday, April 21, 2008

A Haze..thru' teary eyes


Eye lids drop, your face to see,
Tender smile appears to fade,
Heart instils tears,
Melting sorrow n bliss like snow in flames,
Crystal drops gently rolling down...

Take a deep breath,
Summer winds rush thru' panes half open,
Your fragrance is all that's absorbed,
Again a gentle smile appears only to fade,
Crystal tears gently rolling by...

As I listen carefully, hear your fascinating voice,
Once more a fading smile,
Crystal tears come gently rolling by...

I don't move cauz I can feel your cozy arms,
My world's around me,
Curled in the warmth of togetherness,
Eyes closed dreamlike,
That smile transpires again,
Innocent heart showers, emotions tears,
Eyelashes give away,
This time they refuse barriers and flow seamless...
Can't stop these drops rolling down…

Rained and rained,
A hazy view,
Delicate n tender,
Fragile spider web thru flickering lights,
Tinted rainbows u saw in them n precious pearls they were nicked,
Priceless cuddly hugs coming along,
A fondle on those cheeks laden with drops,
Could hear your heart speak soft love,
Snuggled in the circle of your affection,
Tears love shed,
Precious and you never wanted to loose them,
Treasured them,
You called them yours...

14 comments:

Endevourme said...

i remember this pic..did u post it before?
nice post :D

Dhanush said...

This is so beautiful Seema. Really loved it. Crystal Drops gently rolling down.

I always wished if I could stop them. But then life is not always fair :)

Sophroniscus Dialectic said...

I like "reading" portraits and emotions carved with words, esp poems :-)

priya said...

In fragrance we are lost most of the time isn't it. Shyness and love is something to be cherished.

humbl devil said...

are these tears of happiness??


p.s.
have sent a mail...hope, all your questions have been answered...
:)

Rejil Krishnan said...

Collecting those tears of love… cheers ma’m… great thought from that box fixed atop your neck :-) Are tears of joy and betrayal all collected in one… ;-)?
Read the trailing poems too… In one term “A kaleidoscope” of emotions, color, thoughts and imagination… brilliant… am not indulging in idle flattery… will comment one by one …

Abhishek Saini said...

beautiful poem........

Nikhil Kuruvilla said...

Sammatichu, and I hope these are your poetic skills and not beyond that. Smile ya, it looks best on ya (combleementz tane)

Seema said...

Endevourme - sharp memory! Yes, the post is diff this time…Thanx

Dhanush Thank You…where life is concerned and as far as I go…we do our bit and our best:)

SD - Hope this set was likeble! Well…and I sincerely hope "reading the portrait" was worth the time too!

Priya :) I always thought that and you know in getting to the goal we loose those lill lill pleasures that make our path…those are so memorable and enjoyable:) it gives you a lovely experience of life

HD - Just a haze of tears…
On the PS :)))) am smiling…so you have your contacts high up there huhhh okies am gonna send you a list and pls forward it to the Royalty high up there lol…my querries better be answered lol

Rejil - Thanx for all the encouraging words:)
Well...that box fixed atop the neck does all this happily:))) Haze of Tears... joy, happiness and the ones created by distances all merged and stored in this verse!
Take ya time and do drop in your comments..appreciate that you are not at flattery!

Thanks Abishek

Nikhil :))))

humbl devil said...

haze of tears for what occasion???

p.s.

kochhu kalli!!!
:D

Seema said...

hahaaa ee kochu kalli nu okke parayaan padicho lollll...whatz ya upto?

humbl devil said...

whazzup wid me???
chk mail!!!

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Tricksand said...

nice one....