Wednesday, April 16, 2008

On that rippling note ….

Flowing n gliding,
Unbeaten paths,
Footprints for newer ones on journey,
Choices from right n the easy,
Thru the journey...

We'll walk along these roads,
Rain n storms, smiles n tears to encounter,
Glittering waters coupled with violent seas,
There aren’t rainbows without showers,
There's no healing before we face pangs of pain,
So will be the path…

Those days when nothing's right,
Feels lost and life's unfair,
Comfort each other in affection,
Forever thru,
To love each other over n over again,
Together hand in hand facing each curve n bend on these thousand miles,
Thru the journey...

Treasures of a life to share,
Blending with these bright one's the darkest depths of sadness too,
Unconditional trust to share.
Sharing warmth on those endless nights n chirpy mornings,
Sometime looking back at those wonderful memories,
Simple, beautiful, everlasting,
Musical moments ripple…

13 comments:

Dhanush said...

Highly Romantically Philosophical!! :)

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Rain n storms, smiles n tears to encounter,Glittering waters .......
Simple emotions coupled with your carefully coined words are beautiful Seema......

priya said...

Quite romantic and the ripple was beautiful with lovely words.

sandeep said...

the picture caught my eye first ... beautiful ... actually marvelous :)

then i had to read the poem ... i dont read many poems ... but liked this one a lot ... and ofcourse the pic was just right for this!

looking fwd for more line from u ...

humbl devil said...

oye..am i really hearing wedding bells???

this read like someone's wedding vows...
:D

beautifully written...
btw, post updated...

humbl devil said...

you have been tagged

Jac said...

Élan !!!!!!

Endevourme said...

the pic is sooo cute!
isnt life like pearls of memories threaded togather?
dont know why i become serious after coming here!

Seema said...

Dhanush - Quixotic, starry-eyed, utopian...add these too:)))))))

Sapna - Thank You Sapna..nice to have your comments here!

Priya :) Thanks a ton sweetheart

Sandeep - I searched for this pic like crazy...knowing exactly wot i wanted to put with these words..some searches are worth all the effort, I say !
Got the piano and my fav pearls string just the way i wanted...
The concept was musical notes of love put together !
You are always welcome to read my attempt to poetry...and look forward to the eye for details criticism too! Hehee "you had to read the poem" :))

HD - Oyyeeee it must be the church bells that's ringing in your ears lol...am neways writing wedding vows for one of close friends getting into the vowed league soon! will share them here..
This was a dress rehersal;) waise toh apoon khud likhegaa apoon ka vowie lol and he better abide by it hahaaaa

HD - Heyyy youuuuu how can you tag when you've not done your homework on the previous tag...the thumb rule of taggy is that you cant tag the person whose tagged you undilllllllll you complete the tag first ;) lol lemme chek the tag

Jac - Ennaa athinde meaning...i googled and got some googliesss lol...manasilakane bhashayil paranju tharaan mele?

Endevourme - I searched for that pic like i was searching for something really precious and found exotica :) Pearls have a charm that never dies and so life's memories are like those pearls we collect thru' time and string them on...
You mean you were serious all the while?????

Nirmal's Blog said...

hey well written lines...

humbl devil said...

élan n. vivacity, dash. [French]

Seema said...

TY Nirmal.

HD - Thanx..

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